Oh, dear screen
Not a big grin
I’m screaming
Stop teasing
No words to rhyme
I’m out of time
What to write?
Nothing and I hide
I have no line
I’m not fine
This not a lie
Sorry if it’s a crime
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Oh, dear screen
Not a big grin
I’m screaming
Stop teasing
No words to rhyme
I’m out of time
What to write?
Nothing and I hide
I have no line
I’m not fine
This not a lie
Sorry if it’s a crime
Willie Wizzy's 
LOL, I know that feeling! Nicely, and heartfeltly, written.
Yea, actually that’s screaming part was from you. LOL. I remember you told me about that before. I don’t actually scream but that’s the actual feeling when you run out of idea to write.
You should post your poem earlier, you will get more comments!!!
I got reasonable amount of comments. They are encouraging 🙂
Simple.. short and sweet… when there is a pressure, just go and write what comes to you.. some times it comes out beautifully.. and with me most of times I write like that… 🙂
Thanks
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You are right. Just sometimes i can turn out beautiful but mostly it’s so mess up. But i keep it coz might be good lines for other.
This is funny, not to mention honest! For somebody who didn’t have anything to write, you did pretty well. I enjoyed this! 🙂
Thank you. It’s a total mess but still i can get a good comment from you.
No, it’s absolutely not a mess. I disagree! 🙂
the jam wont be long and the inspiration will make you scurry for more paper soon!
Yes. Inspiration…that’s what i need! 🙂
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beautiful,
I like it.
Thanks for sharing.
You are welcome 🙂 After all it’s you who started me to write poem.
Writer’s block know it so well
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yup 🙂 Thanks for your visit!
Deja-vu. I guess we’ve all been there. Never busted my monitor but have been tempted. Mine is here:
LOL. Everyone gone through these. But that’s not my screenXD Never will bust my own screen or others, just get myself in trouble.
You made me laugh. I’m drinking a beer and at first glance thought it said “I have no lime.”
Seriously though, it’s funny. Thanks for sharing.
Oh no, u actually drink and read this. LOL… ‘i have no lime’ sounds so wrong. But thanks to stop by and have a laugh!
This may be a crime as you rhymed wonderfully here.
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Aww…thank you SIS. I will crime more 🙂
pretty humorous, I am enjoying it and love how the image got fixed into your poem, I hope mine don’t crack XD
Please don’t try to do something like that ’cause you will regret. LOL Thanks for stop by 🙂
cute answer to writers block
Glad you got so many comments!!! Me and my big keyboard…
Don’t worry Jessica, we all love your big… keyboard!
Pressure, time puts the squeeze on. I hate having writer’s block! It looks like you did fine.
Pretty much… tight and squeeze!
Seems like our poems are sisters. You don’t know what to write and I need to write. Cheers!
Hi~5! The Sisterhood of traveling pants 🙂
Wonderful in its simple lines. We have all had this happen and we will have it again. The beautiful part? We overcome it. You did well! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for your encouragement. Every comments here treasured. “So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, so long lives this and this gives life… “
Now that’s funny! Thanks for the laugh – and do I need it today, its snowing and -22….
Yea. It’s chill…
You are found guilty and sentenced to crime a lot more 😀
Oh no…lol. Crime lot more!
i can relate to that. in fact i just had one like that. lol. brilliant poem!
Swept Away
Sure. Thanks.
ahh, this is so true x) and in truth, you didn’t commit any crime at all! this is a perfect example of poetical justice. you had all the right ingredients.
love always 🙂 hope you are well
Thank you.
Funny! 😉
but nice rhythm huh!
Thanks
haha! Sounds like writer’s block, happens, isnt it?
Happens all the time. You write well 🙂
Imagery of poets angst. i can ID.
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nicely written!! love it!