You took my heart
Under the spotlight
I tasted love, in my silly fall
Here in love, I give my all
Simple yet so right
You’re so lovely
And love; I can feel that
How can I ever look away?
I count my day
Every day is a blissful day
When I no more could turn away
I love it that way
Once you taste love, beautiful love, it’s hard to turn away, always dreaming for more and more!
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you are invited to join our potluck week 12 at Jingle Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Write a poem fitting our week 12 theme (Nature, Plants, Creations & The Cosmos), post it, and link in to our potluck, you are also allowed to link in unrelated poems. we are open Sunday, 8pm, American central time.
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Another good poem.
This doesn’t have any of the annoying cliches that often come with a love poem.
I think that is good. lol
Thanks. I’m not sure if this is good. You are the few say it’s good. I’ll just cont. write. So long i enjoy it.
Sounds like she has you hypnotised with love!
A good one, Mr Willy!!
She= imagination. Very addictive!
beautiful !! it so so lovely read 🙂
Thank you.
oh my~ u should save this for valentine occasion! its lovely!
You know, Christmas can be a romantic occasion too. Use it if u need it 🙂
mmm, yea i know exactly how you feel in this poem. It may seem silly or like we are giving too much of ourselves away…..but The rule of what is fair in love and war that i always am sure to uphold: It’s better to have loved and lost than never had been loved at all.”
Thank you. Glad to see you here 🙂 Love is such a vast topic to write and sometimes i found it’s hard to write until you experience it. I like when u say it’s better to have loved and lost than never had been loved at all.
Awww….that was sweet without sounding cheesy!! Beautifully written 🙂
Thank you. I guess when u want to write it will just come like that…inspiration such an important element indeed.
very beautiful.
you nailed it.
A+
Thank you, Missy Jingle!