When i don’t know

I’m a trouble child
Always tore inside
Always can’t let go
Always lost my way

When I fall so many times
When I don’t know if I could climb another hill
When I don’t know what I’ll become
When I don’t know who I am

Yours little voice
To my heart you whisper
That I should move on without fear
‘Cause you will always here with me

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55 thoughts on “When i don’t know

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  3. well delivered message,
    sweet and smart piece…

    Thanks …
    Happy Rally.

    it is 8:30am now in my place, at 7:40am, after approving the comments, I drive to send my boy to school by 8am…..

  4. Peace to you. This piece speaks to me. 🙂

    I love reflective poems. They induce growth.

    Yours sincerely,
    Philharmonic poet.

  5. so many of us are “troubled children” and what we have to remember is to listen to that little voice who always cares. There are so many things we don’t know, but the good thing about that is that we will get to learn it all someday

      • well i hope you believe Willie (: its the only thing we got sometimes…
        i’m so glad you entered this in the rally! i hope you check out mine

  6. How are you?

    Please keep in mind to:

    #1: return favor to poets who visited you
    #2: complete 18 comments to your peers…or fresh poets to explore..

    Thanks for the lovely contribution, it is fun when everyone gets the job done…
    Happy Tuesday!

    xxx

  7. THIS IS QUITE REFLECTIVE AND ASSURING. I ADMIRE THIS SO MUCH AND ADORE THE POET. I DARE TO SAY THIS: YOU WRITE WITH WISDOM. WHEN WE ARE DOWN, A SMALL RESILIENT VOICE IS ALWAYS THERE TO PULL US THROUGH.

  8. Gorgeous poem!
    I like how it doesn’t say who is “here” with you.
    Is it a person or the divine, great depth!

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  10. Another poetry, I don’t really understand what you wrote on here. Are you describing the Lord who always be ur side? cause I don’t think is a person.

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