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When i don’t know

Posted on January 13, 2011 by williewizzy

I’m a trouble child
Always tore inside
Always can’t let go
Always lost my way

When I fall so many times
When I don’t know if I could climb another hill
When I don’t know what I’ll become
When I don’t know who I am

Yours little voice
To my heart you whisper
That I should move on without fear
‘Cause you will always here with me

55 thoughts on “When i don’t know”

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Jingle on January 13, 2011 at 2:30 pm said:

well delivered message,
sweet and smart piece…

Thanks …
Happy Rally.

it is 8:30am now in my place, at 7:40am, after approving the comments, I drive to send my boy to school by 8am…..

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:09 am said:
  
  Great to hear that 🙂 My dad use to send me to school when i’m young. In the car, always ‘the moment’ lecture of life’s experience. LOL.
  
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Jessica on January 13, 2011 at 4:31 pm said:

Ah, very sweet! Someone obviously likes you alot.
Nicely set out poem, my kind of format.

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:10 am said:
  
  Thank you, Jess. There’s many people around me care me a lot. Just that i never notice until a while ago.
  
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Sam373 on January 13, 2011 at 4:41 pm said:

I remember those feelings. To think they are still real.

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kolembo on January 13, 2011 at 6:19 pm said:

it’s a simple voice, very clear. nice. -rallypoet-

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:12 am said:
  
  Yes, a simple one. Just need to learn to hear properly and it bring whole lot different experience of life.
  
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chakasichangi on January 13, 2011 at 9:49 pm said:

Peace to you. This piece speaks to me. 🙂

I love reflective poems. They induce growth.

Yours sincerely,
Philharmonic poet.

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:14 am said:
  
  Thank you to drop by.
  
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ladynimue on January 13, 2011 at 11:28 pm said:

sweet ! honest lines 🙂

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:15 am said:
  
  Thank you 🙂 It’s still real until now. Probably until i my last day.
  
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Lu Ann on January 14, 2011 at 2:59 am said:

Aww it´s very heart warming… It made me smile a lot, it is always beautiful knowing somebody is there even when you feel like you´re totally lost!

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:16 am said:
  
  Definitely. It can be anyone close to you. This i have specific person on my mind, think about when i’m writing it.
  
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lolamouse on January 14, 2011 at 7:07 pm said:

gives me a warm, fuzzy feeling!

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:17 am said:
  
  Thank you. Great you feel it that way 🙂
  
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exitsbyalice on January 14, 2011 at 7:53 pm said:

inspiring, trusting that voice of the heart

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:18 am said:
  
  Yea. That ‘intuition’ can be very true most of the time.
  
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booguloo on January 14, 2011 at 8:53 pm said:

Very Nice.

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:21 am said:
  
  Thank you, booguloo.
  
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belladonna23 on January 14, 2011 at 10:02 pm said:

so many of us are “troubled children” and what we have to remember is to listen to that little voice who always cares. There are so many things we don’t know, but the good thing about that is that we will get to learn it all someday

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:22 am said:
  
  I’m still feel that way until today. There’s too many junction of life. Too many uncertainties. Just got to believe what you are believing and move on with that.
  
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  - belladonna23 on February 18, 2011 at 8:42 pm said:
    
    well i hope you believe Willie (: its the only thing we got sometimes…
    i’m so glad you entered this in the rally! i hope you check out mine
David (1MereMortal) on January 14, 2011 at 11:05 pm said:

Excellent write…especially liked:

“Yours little voice,
To my heart you whisper,
That I should move on without fear,
‘Cause you will always here with me.”

Thank you for sharing.

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:23 am said:
  
  Thank you. Yea, fear is the biggest hindrance in many way. But with little support you can take a small step for a giant leap.
  
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lovepunaanybad on January 15, 2011 at 4:36 am said:

Powerful and empowering! When I Don’t Know, is a very thoughtful poetic expression and the main ingredient to this thing that we call, love!

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- williewizzy on January 15, 2011 at 5:27 am said:
  
  You nailed it! 🙂 Thank you.
  
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cloakedmonk on January 15, 2011 at 2:47 pm said:

Moving through fear can cause great anxiety. But with love guiding us…

Shalom.

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- williewizzy on January 16, 2011 at 7:00 am said:
  
  Love give us the needed courage/gut to go through it.
  
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Artswebshow on January 16, 2011 at 4:19 pm said:

I like the positive note that enters in the third verse,
Great job here

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- williewizzy on January 17, 2011 at 11:18 am said:
  
  Thank you.
  
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Life: Between the lines on January 16, 2011 at 6:53 pm said:

🙂 cool piece!

Thanks
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- williewizzy on January 18, 2011 at 12:40 pm said:
  
  Thanks 🙂
  
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Melissa on January 17, 2011 at 10:00 pm said:

Willy, I appreciate the thought that we all need that one person to pick us up when we are down.

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- williewizzy on January 18, 2011 at 12:41 pm said:
  
  Thank you. We definitely live better with support or guide. Have a good day!
  
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Lu Ann on January 18, 2011 at 2:54 am said:

I have an specific person too 🙂

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- williewizzy on January 18, 2011 at 12:41 pm said:
  
  Great to hear that 🙂
  
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ladynimue on January 18, 2011 at 3:42 pm said:

simple and effective ! this little voice can do miracles 🙂

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FlicShis on January 18, 2011 at 4:56 pm said:

Nice piece….

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I Look Forward to…

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Jingle on January 18, 2011 at 7:22 pm said:

How are you?

Please keep in mind to:

#1: return favor to poets who visited you
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Thanks for the lovely contribution, it is fun when everyone gets the job done…
Happy Tuesday!

xxx

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- williewizzy on January 19, 2011 at 1:38 pm said:
  
  Done.
  
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Jingle Poetry on January 19, 2011 at 1:06 am said:

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poetryoftheasian on January 19, 2011 at 7:24 am said:

Interesting read, I liked the flow of the poem as well.

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ogungbesan20 on January 19, 2011 at 12:12 pm said:

THIS IS QUITE REFLECTIVE AND ASSURING. I ADMIRE THIS SO MUCH AND ADORE THE POET. I DARE TO SAY THIS: YOU WRITE WITH WISDOM. WHEN WE ARE DOWN, A SMALL RESILIENT VOICE IS ALWAYS THERE TO PULL US THROUGH.

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Desiree on January 20, 2011 at 1:02 pm said:

Very sweet, I’m glad you got a person like that.. : )

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Dakshi on January 23, 2011 at 3:35 pm said:

After reading this, I felt happy.. 😀
Thank you..

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timefliesbyquickly on January 24, 2011 at 6:24 pm said:

Gorgeous poem!
I like how it doesn’t say who is “here” with you.
Is it a person or the divine, great depth!

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Jingle on February 1, 2011 at 1:54 am said:

Thanks for linking…

very honest and elegant poem.

A++

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The Reason You Come on February 2, 2011 at 11:43 am said:

This is heartwarming and romantic!

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kolembo on February 2, 2011 at 9:26 pm said:

oh, hey…very quiet, very good.

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belladonna23 on February 2, 2011 at 10:50 pm said:

i envy this feeling… but i still wish you love. I could never with you anything else but all that you deserve 🙂
here’s my piece if you want to read it:
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/28/sonnet-vii/

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joannecool on February 3, 2011 at 4:27 pm said:

Another poetry, I don’t really understand what you wrote on here. Are you describing the Lord who always be ur side? cause I don’t think is a person.

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mindlovemisery on June 13, 2011 at 5:14 am said:

Beautiful I have felt that way honestly I still do sometimes feel like the same troubled child.

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