I can’t see you,
I can’t hear you,
I can’t smell you,
I can’t think of you.
Willie Wizzy's
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I can’t see you,
I can’t hear you,
I can’t smell you,
I can’t think of you.
Willie Wizzy's 
wow,
you are amazing,
nicely done!
I enjoyed it.
Are you infatuated with someone? I think it could be read that way too, that you can’t bear to be without them…or is it just me??
You are good! How do you know that’s the feelings. It’s not them but ‘her’. Kinda sad.
it’s a woman thing….
thought provoking poem.. I like it!
Thanks you like it.
Frankly I think this is very simple and explanatory in its way. The simplicity is what brings the beauty. I like it in its own way. Keep writing!
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it sounds almost as if your desperately trying to ignore someone in this poem- as if you only WISH they never existed. Your denying their presence yet your paying so much attention to them- all in only four sweet lines. great poem
That’s the ironic about everything. You care too much but sometimes it’s as good as not existed. Anyway, i’m done and get over it. Sweetbitter.
it seems so- he/she never existed at all.
I wish tat person no exist in my life too; but i thanks god tat he or she exist at least i learnt something in my life from them..to love them more as christ love me
air, fun verse…
strangers in a far away land maybe….
Thought-provoking and a bit sad, even some anger.. great work, Willy 🙂
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Very thought provoking my friend, loved the read though sad too . Thanks for linking with Potluck xx
interesting association between your poem and the image…